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我翻译一首短文关于“哥本哈根的雕像没人鱼”，但是我不知道我翻译
这受短文翻译得好不好。你可以告诉我吗。非常谢谢你们

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美人鱼雕像一直是哥本哈根的著名旅游景点及城市标志
The mermaid Copenhagen’s is undoubtedly a famous tourist attraction and the treasure of the town.
3月25日这天，这个丹麦国宝更是倍受瞩目。
On the 25 of march, that day this Danish treasure stood in the center of attention.
约有300多人目睹了美人鱼雕像被一辆吊车吊起装上卡车，她将从这里启程去上海参加世博会。直到11月再回来。
Approximately 300 people witnessed the mermaid being hoisted by a crane on a truck, from here she will be transported to the world exhibition of Shanghai, only to return after 11 months.
除了好奇的哥本哈根市民和游客,
Except for the curious townsmen of Copenhagen and tourists,
丹麦经济商业大巨布莱恩-米格森和哥本哈根市长福兰克-严森也亲临了美人鱼首次远行的告别现场。
Danmark’s financial and commercial guru Brian Migelson and the mayor of Copenhagen Frank Jensen
also came personally attended the mermaid’s leave on her first voyage.
市长在告别致词中说：“小美人鱼的离开是为了让哥本哈根市立足在世界的版图上。
The mayor in his opening speech said: “we will part from our mermaid, so that we can put Copenhagen on the world map.
虽然哥本哈根小，美人鱼小，但也足以引起世界的注目。我们期待她11月的会归。”
Although Copenhagen is small, the mermaid is small, she still will attract enough interest throughout the world. We expect her to return after 11 month’s”
哥本哈根少年合唱团以一首“我出生在丹麦“向美人鱼告别。
The junior chorus of Copenhagen sung as one “I am born in Denmark” during the departure of the mermaid.
在上海，美人鱼将常被安旅在名为“富利童话“的丹麦展馆里展出
In Shanghai, the mermaid is put on display at the Danish exhibition
而在美人鱼雕像自1913年以来的坐落处，将会装上一个视频装置，展示“小美人鱼”的旅程，这样游客可以在哥本哈根见证她的中国之旅。
At the location of the mermaid since it was finished in 1913, a video presentation of the mermaid´s journey will be shown, in that way the tourists in Copenhagen can witness her journey to China.

有关美人鱼是否应该离开家乡去上海世博会曾经引起许多人的争议。
There is already much controversy among may people about whether or not the mermaid had to part her hometown to go Shanghai´s world exhibition.
其中反对迁移的一方，以美人鱼雕像的创作者爱德华。
Among those who opposed to the migration, was the creator of the mermaid statue Edward.
艾里克森的后代为代表，但终因雕像的所遇权归哥本哈根政府，
Although the offspring are represented, the revenues of the statue go to the government of Copenhagen,
在前任市长为首的市府管员的推动下，
under the civil servant promoter , led by the former mayor,
美人鱼雕像终于首次离开家乡，远去-中国。
the mermaid statue at last left her hometown, on a journey to China.
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