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From : Alissia Jackson
Date : 2009-03-17 / 11:23AM
Ni hao, Benny!
Here is what I have gotten so far. I really appreciate you helping me with this. I’m just having problems with constructing my sentences and a bit of grammar.
Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary.
Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore-
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly, there came a tapping,
As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
“Tis some visitor ,” I muttered, “tapping at my chamber door-
Only this and nothing more.”
Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December,
And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
Eagerly I wished the morrow; – vainly I had sought to borrow
From my books surcease of sorrow- sorrow for the lost Lenore-
For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels name Lenore-
Nameless here for evermore.
You yi tian chen men wu ye de shi hou, while I pondered, wu li de he yan juan de. Zai shang mian hen duo de mei he xi qi juan of chan tong hu lue le -
While I nodded, zhen zai xiao shui, ji hu, tu ran there came zhen zai meng lie ji da.
As of mou ren rapping, rapping zai wo de men. Some * wasn’t sure which one to use* you ke," wo gu nong le zhen zai meng lie ji da zai wo de men. “Zhege he nothing more.”
E, wo xiang qi it was in the bleak shi er yue. And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor.
Eagerly, Ming tian wo xu guan le, -
This is what I have so far. Some of the word ending in -ing I wasn’t sure if I could put “di” at the end because it had "de " the end already. Again, I thank you for helping me with this poem!! I hope this isn’t too much of a problem. Xie xie ni!! :)
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